Saturday, August 15, 2009

A 7 Year Olds Essay

There is a Webkinz essay contest (max 1000 characters) to write an essay about a Pterodactyl and win a "virtual" webkinz. This is A's entry (she is going int 2nd grade in two weeks!). I helped out with spelling, she did the rest (It's about 850 characters). And she worked on it for about an hour. I'm a proud mama whether she wins or not. And clearly purple is a good color for Lily.

The pterodactyl's name is Lily. Flying is good for her because she will probably scare away the animals that would eat her. She could fly to Kiddieland. She loves banana splits and lemonade. Her favorite toy is a bouncy ball shaped like an egg. She has to stay on a leash or she will fly away. Her best webkinz friend is a yorkshire terrier named Puffy. They read a lot. Their favorite to read is a beauty magazine. They have a secret clubhouse in the owner's basement in a blowup palm tree. The house is made out of styrofoam. Lily sleeps in a treetop bed. She rides in a horse drawn carriage with her owner. Lily is in a rock and roll band and takes ballet. She wears a purple sparkling dress with purple sparkling high heel shoes and a purple sparkling head band with a bow. If I win, Lily will be my best friend. The end.

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